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The glare of the first gate blinds her momentarily; her memories flooded with a luminescence overpowering. She can't remember who she is, or why she's here.
She is oblivious to herself and the world around her; all she knows is the gate and the surrounding darkness. Hesitantly, she steps through, and is blinded again by a bright white glare.
Slowly the glare dies down as her eyes adjust. She can see clearly now; both the gate and her memory. She had traveled a long way to be here, to open this gate. She had travelled across the galaxy in the blink of an eye, she had opened a portal through time and space, and she had climbed through it. A portal in her mind, and it was such a portal that she could grant herself this omnipresence.
Her people were the Skylarks, and they knew her as a Gatekeeper; they recognised her unique abilities as mirroring those of the ancients. She was the remnant of a past long forgotten…
She arrived in a city overrun by smog and giant grey buildings. "Is this Tokyo?" she wondered. Below her feet lay a crumpled piece of paper, covered in the words of a different world. The front cover illuminated a bright emerald green stone. "Zephyr" she read. It dawned on her; she must locate the emerald stone, as it linked to her ancestors.
Ahead of her, she could see – as though her ancestors guided her – a shimmering in the air. It was this, she knew, to be the next gate she must open. She stepped forward into the shimmer, and closed her eyes. She concentrated; listened for those guiding voices.
A sudden bright white light encompassed her mind; the second gate opened. The image of the Zephyr stone burnt into her memory.
She is oblivious to herself and the world around her; all she knows is the gate and the surrounding darkness. Hesitantly, she steps through, and is blinded again by a bright white glare.
Slowly the glare dies down as her eyes adjust. She can see clearly now; both the gate and her memory. She had traveled a long way to be here, to open this gate. She had travelled across the galaxy in the blink of an eye, she had opened a portal through time and space, and she had climbed through it. A portal in her mind, and it was such a portal that she could grant herself this omnipresence.
Her people were the Skylarks, and they knew her as a Gatekeeper; they recognised her unique abilities as mirroring those of the ancients. She was the remnant of a past long forgotten…
She arrived in a city overrun by smog and giant grey buildings. "Is this Tokyo?" she wondered. Below her feet lay a crumpled piece of paper, covered in the words of a different world. The front cover illuminated a bright emerald green stone. "Zephyr" she read. It dawned on her; she must locate the emerald stone, as it linked to her ancestors.
Ahead of her, she could see – as though her ancestors guided her – a shimmering in the air. It was this, she knew, to be the next gate she must open. She stepped forward into the shimmer, and closed her eyes. She concentrated; listened for those guiding voices.
A sudden bright white light encompassed her mind; the second gate opened. The image of the Zephyr stone burnt into her memory.
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this is a very interesting story and i'm looking forward to reading the next part of the story i'm hoping to read the next one and i cannot wait until you write it and submit it.
this is one of the best stories i have ever read, the story was mind-blowing and i hope to be the first to give critique to your next part of this story.
the originality was great and i liked the bit at the end with the stone and want it to be included in the next chapter of this exciting, mind-blowing, fantastic and awesome story
good job